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11 October
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Tension and Suspense Writing

This morning, we studied techniques to add tension and suspense to our creative writing. Here are some of our first efforts:

Joni’s Writing

Lucy B’s Writing

Tara’s Writing

Ben’s Writing

Olivia’s Writing

 

One Response to “Tension and Suspense Writing”

  1. Miss Q says:

    Wow! I loved listening to these creepy paragraphs! My favourite parts were the scary metaphors like Joni saying that ‘fear danced’, Lucy saying ‘sweat tiptoed’ and Tara saying ‘worries walked’. I also liked the short sentences that made tension like when Ben built up the tension saying ‘this is not for the faint hearted’ and then the short sentence ‘He walked in.’ But my favourite part was Olivia saying the trees were ‘whispering secrets’ – so creepy! I think my Halloween will be extra spooky after listening to these and the music made it all the more creepy! Well done 6C! Miss Q

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